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Just One Day
Contributed by
dreaming-of-your-love
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Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 07:18:34 PM in AEST
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Everyday i wish i could go away
i just need that one day!
just to take a breath to catch up on everything that has been said
i just need the time of day
so i can try to make this go away
please help me find that girl
the girl that i have been looking for
she is somewhere in my body
she cant make it anymore
she wants to run through the door
i think about it every night you know bringing out the knife
it is to hard to do
because i am still in love with you
i just need one day
just to break the pain away
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Re: Just One Day
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by Lin54 on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 10:06:21 PM AEST
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Good feeling writing!
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Re: Just One Day
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 12:32:25 AM AEST
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Sweetie, we all feel this way at times. Just one day........ Good write. If I can help, I'm just next door. ;o) Sorry it took me so long to get to you, I haven't been on in awhile. I hope you feel better soon. Luv Ya!
Peace to you, 'cause you deserve it!
Gramma Thumps ;o) |
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