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My Lunch Box by Sara
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Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 04:51:54 PM in AEST
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My Lunch box
By Sara C.
One day it was lunch
I opened my lunch box
Boy I had a bunch
I had turkey, ham but mostly Spam
I had chicken and lollipops that I was lickin
I had applesauce and pizza sauce
Man I wonder how much this costs?
I ate and ate and ate and ate and ate
And all that was left was a napkin
It said : Man, girl you better eat all of this
Because mommas been packin! Love mom.
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Re: My Lunch Box by Sara
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by shortcut on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 04:54:26 PM AEST
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| Very cute- nice writing! |
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Re: My Lunch Box by Sara
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 05:37:14 PM AEST
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well done Sara I bet your mom is proud
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by sammydid on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 05:54:12 PM AEST
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| so cute!!! :) |
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Re: My Lunch Box by Sara
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 07:00:24 PM AEST
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That must be one huge box.
Very good writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Lunch Box by Sara
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 12:21:57 AM AEST
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| Yeah Sara. Great write. Need to come eat out of your lunchbox, I think. Peace to you, Laura (who has a daughter who is 9, and wants to post her poems here) :) |
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Re: My Lunch Box by Sara
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 06:23:24 AM AEST
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Sara
This poem is more than cute it shows through the strong love between you and your Mom.
Always keep that love you are both very special to one another.
Sara I really--really enjoyed your lovig poem.
Sinned---my name backwards as not to leave you and your Mom wondering.
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