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Meaning of life.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 05:21:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am aching and acting and adding and ageing in my life.
I am asking for you to back off why I am bagging the groceries.
The dog is barking outsided.
I am bathing the dog and beating the rug.
I went out biking and took a blessing from my life.
I wished there was a blooming reason for calling my siblings.
I wanted to go camping but I was cheating myself out of that for buying time.
I am choosing to clean my house and climbing the walls and clinging to the past .
I am closing the doors to my past life and failing and hating and living in crap.
I am loafing in life and loosing everytime.
I am always searching and seeing nothing and I am shying away from my siblings.
I am thinking of my siblings when I am walking and I am wounded in my life .
I am thinking all of this has got to STOP!!
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Re: Meaning of life.
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 05:33:44 PM AEST
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I enjoy your style ...hang in there life has many twists and turns
Shari |
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Re: Meaning of life.
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 06:11:27 PM AEST
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hang tuff.
U r much stronger than u think.
I hope things work out great for u.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Meaning of life.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 06:48:31 PM AEST
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I have read a lot of your. I have not commented on any of it, because I was not sure that I understood you. Nine times out of ten that is the reader's fault, not the writer's. Anyway, I have to admit you are really starting to grow on me. I like this one a good deal.
- SCM |
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Re: Meaning of life.
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by themonk on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:39:52 PM AEST
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| very Allen Ginsberg like, but wiht some nice originality, good work overall. |
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Re: Meaning of life.
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 11:20:24 PM AEST
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| Well, now my friend. This one I am not confused by. I think I still have much to learn about poetry, poets and individual styles. I liked this. Well done. Peace, Laura |
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