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Bottled
Contributed by
devilseye
on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 02:01:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Bottled up inside
Hiding for so long
Building rage wide
What could go wrong?
With what will release you
To run death through my veins
What will it come to?
Unlock the chains
No need for a key
Im full to the top
No need to set free
When will it stop?
Once youre drawn
Alive till death
And then your gone
Take a deep breath
You will return
But not quite yet
Youve left a burn
Youre still a threat
Youre a different me
On a different path
Forget the key
Unleash the wrath
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devilseye
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2006-02-07 02:01:10]
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Re: Bottled
(User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 03:34:48 PM AEST
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very well written! it's not so obvious in its intentions or
message, and leaves much to the imagination of
the reader. My favourite stanza was:
You’re a different me
On a different path
Forget the key
Unleash the wrath
great piece... keep it up! |
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