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taste for blood
Contributed by
fattony
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Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 11:46:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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stabbing in the skin
started with a pin
it went though that thin
bloody skin
started slicing with a razor
it started like a tazer
but not as a blaze
buck knife was the answer
to my cancer
but it did not satisfy
the taste for blood
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Re: taste for blood
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 03:43:12 PM AEST
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very short and sweet. and the imagery is very brutal!
keep up the fine writing! |
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Re: taste for blood
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by darkstarsk8er1989 on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 07:15:57 PM AEST
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I love the violent image I got from this write. very good.
~Dark~ |
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