|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The mood of a mind
Contributed by
Dragontear27
on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 08:18:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
|
Perplexed by the wind in a storm
looking around to see where it gushes from
confused by the sun's inviting warmth
and greeted by the burn from which it grants
crying to the ground when it holds you up
yelling when it falls beneth you
clouds shrouding over you in darkness
letting you see it's good side when light
starring at the stars soul as it blinds you
and dimmming itself into non existance
freezing as the water rushes onto your body
drifting when it carries you away
...then it stops.....the silence before the storm
making you nervious....letting you cherish the moment
then it finally hits...the big one
everything ends
Copyright ©
Dragontear27
... [
2006-02-07 20:18:30]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The mood of a mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by moses on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 08:30:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
good write, i can see the many emotions, i feel em', i like it alot
keep it up,
-m-o-s |
|
|
Re: The mood of a mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 08:31:41 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Exellent writing.
I luv the way u set the mood.
Was that the end of the Planet or the mood?
Actually I suppose that would be up to the reader, huh?
Maybe it was a brain tornadoe sttorm.
very creative, thought provoking write.
good work.
huggs,
emy
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
