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SERENITY
Contributed by
TommyD
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Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 01:14:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As lightning did pierce the heavens
Causing the clouds to weep rainbows
Upon frail roses
In wind swept meadows
Where timeless innocence
Forever dwells in reverent joy
Beckoned only by the beauty of you.
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TommyD
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2006-02-08 01:14:02]
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Re: SERENITY
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by rockergirl94 on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 06:12:09 PM AEST
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I really like this. Great metaphors, and the mood of the poem was really consistant. I love every single line. It's a really beautiful poem. I especially love the lines,
"Causing the clouds to weep rainbows
Upon frail roses"
Never stop writing. It's really rare that I hear a poem as good as this one, and I really like your style.
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