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For John
Contributed by
lady-quiet-dreamer
on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 01:01:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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There is one who knows my hidden desires,
And who knows how to light my inner fires.
Under His guidance i came out of my shell,
And His understanding is like ringing a bell.
My love for Him makes me weak,
And it also makes me meek.
For Him to want me makes me filled with joy,
I never thought i was desirable; oh boy.
He shows me my inner beauty,
Which shows His love truly.
His orders are simple to obey,
And i go at them without delay.
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Re: For John
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by inad on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 01:12:15 AM AEST
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| This poem sounds like you learned about your inner beauty, But truthfully, it sounds like you learned confidence. It is a wonderful poem. |
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