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Deaths Promise
Contributed by
Kayden
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Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 04:12:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Come quick now you have to see this
Lament a tear for every piercing
Fade this skin of agony
That I may be set free
Living proof that I bleed for you
You wanted it now heres the truth
Cry alone now die alone
See me there, an unwilling demise from you
Laying here, augmented tribulation
These holes of life, that now drain me dry
Life held now on thin metal
Fade away, that I may be set free
In and out of this darkened chateau
I chose to walk this path alone
To find the way of higher sovereignty
To relieve the burden on the spread skin
Let death now caress my soul
Bringing it to the paramount blessing
Entrance my illusions, and finally set me free
Let me roam, in faded anguish
Copyright ©
Kayden
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2006-02-08 16:12:39]
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Re: Deaths Promise
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by gah_veh on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 05:44:31 PM AEST
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| great poem very descriptive in a way great thinking out side the box, loved the wording |
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Re: Deaths Promise
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 05:45:56 PM AEST
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A real thought provoking write you have here. The ryhme and flow sensational. A great and very well penned piece of poetry. Captivates the reader from beginning to end. Well done.
*warm hugs*
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