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This is My Reality
Contributed by
all_that_i_can_be
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Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 10:44:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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days pass as a blur, voices go by
unseen and unheard, realities a lie
like watching a movie, its hard to believe
this is something you could never concieve
grasping hands search, into darkness i sink
dont know what to do, when i cant even think
I've got to do something to get myself out
pain darkness and tears cant be what lifes about
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Re: This is My Reality
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 11:40:01 PM AEST
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" Days pass as a blur, voices go by
unseen and unheard, realities a lie" WOW Loved the write. Those lines are priceless. Peace, Laura |
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Re: This is My Reality
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:51:02 PM AEST
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It's amazing how much can be said in a little amount of words. A very well penned write filled with the emotional struggles of ones inner self. Well done and keep up with the great work.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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