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Waterfall of Passion
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 08:12:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She walks along by the waterfall
Listening to the birds love call
Gently a hand on her shoulder
She turns into his arms he holds her
A kiss of hottest passions ensues
Sparks fly from their bodies in brightest hues
His hands her body hungrily traces
He does not miss any spaces
They have waited so long to conspire
And light this erotic loves first fire
Their bodies sway to a rhythm all their own
And they now lay where the green grass is grown
Lips meeting flesh in a frantic race
Never has their desire met such a pace
As the cascading water falls to the earth
It only gives their yearning rebirth
Rising and ebbing the longing for each touch
The burning, the need, oh how they want so much
To remain in this embrace for eternity
Their bodies swaying with the palm trees
Their bodies from loves union spent
Around them passions sweet scent
One last embrace under the moonlight
And a gentle kiss goodnight
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NoSaint
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2006-02-09 08:12:08]
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Re: Waterfall of Passion
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 09:43:25 AM AEST
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| Such deep passion put to words so beautifully...Mike |
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Re: Waterfall of Passion
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by Shmokin on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 10:37:17 AM AEST
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| Good read, lots of passion, expressed well, thanx for sharin :-) |
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Re: Waterfall of Passion
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 10:38:02 PM AEST
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| This is a very beautiful poem, bodies in motion with the universe. It is so alive, this poem, all my senses become alive as I read it, as your chosen words are so alive.. Just beautiful, and I can truly understand why Norm loved it. He is reading it in heaven smiling at you. Hugs from me.. raquelleah |
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Re: Waterfall of Passion
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 11:06:38 PM AEST
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| Wow! I never read such great passion before. You have a great creative gift. |
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Re: Waterfall of Passion
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 02:49:06 AM AEST
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An exquisite masterpiece.! I can see why Norm liked these poems so well. This being the beginning, makes me look forward to the rest. A simply, excellent write.
Splendid!
- SCM |
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Re: Waterfall of Passion
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 03:16:28 PM AEST
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Passion indeed!!
Enjoyed this again. Thanks for reposting it..
Jenni |
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Re: Waterfall of Passion
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 05:16:13 AM AEST
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Dear Shari,
What a kind and thoughtful thing to do Shari.
Norm just loved your waterfall poems. I wish we could find the comments that he would leave behind! He rhymed all of his comments, and I know he would have had said something really funny. He thought these poems of yours were gems, and often told me how he thought the poetress behind them was very creative and wrote good sexy poems!
Wonderful
Warm love
consue |
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