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For Real
Contributed by
T-Rod
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Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 08:39:59 AM in AEST
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You don't know how I feel
You just don't know what I want
You don't know me very well
There's more to me than what you can see with your eyes
I may be pretty and witty but it's nothing to
My random statements that take you by suprize
It's easy for me to say what I want to say out loud and proud
And you can't hurt me because I've been hurt
Too many times before and it has taken me down to the floor
But I am myself
-Nobody can change that or try to break me
Because I've been broken-hearted and it hurt so much
And it has made me stronger
And made me feel like I actually belong here
Copyright ©
T-Rod
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2006-02-09 08:39:59]
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Re: For Real
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by Lin54 on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 10:33:10 AM AEST
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Good poem--tell me--who really knows anyone?
It sounds like you've been hurt too many times. So have I, but I'm not sure it makes one stronger or that they build a hard impenetrable wall around them --especially their heart. I know that is what I have done and am afraid to take the wall down.
Keep writing--I liked this!
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