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The Singer
Contributed by
Shmokin
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Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 10:42:56 AM in AEST
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The Singer
The Singer creates songs that touch
How can this person know so much
Uncovering parts of me
I thought no one could see
Does this make me shallow
Or is it him who is deep
From pools of worldly wisdom
Inspiration reap
Prick my conscience
Pull my heart strings
My selfishness reveal
know my weakness
See my anger
In awe before, I kneel
Know me now, and way back when
Know what I desire and what I defend
Tender moments, heartfelt pains
My emotions that he claims
The inner groan, muffled sighs
The hurt caused by so many lies
A knowing truth
A bond is made
To all my being
He serenades
XShmokinX
Copyright ©
Shmokin
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2006-02-09 10:42:56]
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Re: The Singer
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by Nos_Bunny on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 11:49:09 AM AEST
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| Very nice, I love it |
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Re: The Singer
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 12:40:51 PM AEST
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just plain beautifully done
NS |
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Re: The Singer
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:46:59 PM AEST
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A great piece of poetry penned so well. I like the way u captivate ur reader into reading ur poem from start to finish. Musical notes that touch ones soul. Well done and keep up with the great work.
*warm hugs*
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Re: The Singer
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by Minus_Blindfold on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 07:04:50 PM AEST
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| You're telling us what a singer should reveal thru his/her music. But don't forget the music that doesn't just reveal our emotions, but inspire us to be better or awaken our true awareness of the diverse meaning of life! |
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Re: The Singer
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by Minus_Blindfold on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 07:05:43 PM AEST
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| ...oh yes i almost forgot...great poem!! |
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