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Can anyone Save
Contributed by
Kayden
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Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 04:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Running around, try and find a sound
That keeps me hear alive
So distant so far gone
Can anyone save me
Living hear, nothing but a fodder for the ones
That keep me hear once more
To suppress all of their desires
Walking among the damned
Come and help me if you can
Try and fail again
Deaths has his grip on me
Can anyone save
Can anything save
Me_________
Nothing but a lost waste of time
Come and help me now your mine
Nothing but a vessel for the ones
That keep me here disorient
So far gone, souls dont mean anything
Living as the walking dead
Who says heavens real
Who say Hells real
Can anyone save me
Come and help me if you can
Try and fail again
Deaths has his grip on me
Can anyone save
Can anything save
Me_________
Copyright ©
Kayden
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Re: Can anyone Save
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:39:02 PM AEST
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Jimmy,
A real thought provoking write u have here. One can feel the pain and suffering from within themselves. A very well penned write. Keep up the great work.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Can anyone Save
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 12:45:33 AM AEST
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hey there,
i agree with sue, a very thought provoking write, i especially like the fourth stanza,
great choice of words.
amazing job |
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Re: Can anyone Save
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by Whisper on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 10:31:31 PM AEST
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A dark and sad write. Well presented
whisper |
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Re: Can anyone Save
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by hauntedangel on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 05:56:26 PM AEST
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| great poem well written, its a great poem for dark entry |
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Re: Can anyone Save
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 02:37:23 PM AEST
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Well written poem...I liked it alot.
Jeff |
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Re: Can anyone Save
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by Lo2681 on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 03:51:25 PM AEST
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Very deep write. I like the structure of this. Nice wrie. I look forward to reading more.:)
~Lo |
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