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War Hero
Contributed by
justinjohnoliver
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Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 08:26:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Draw your arms and take aim
The battle has begun
A sweeping shadow falls across the land
Fortelling the blood that will soon be shed
The sun sets down and the moon turns crimson red
As a hideous beast rises out of the sea
A devastation, a massacre
Nothing good can come of this
A soldier comes across a child
With tears streaming down his face
The soldier must die in sorrowful shame
But the child goes on
Rebuilding what has been destroyed
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2006-02-09 20:26:57]
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Re: War Hero
(User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 08:33:07 PM AEST
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it's ok....i think you could go into more detail with this...give us a reason to care...
anyway, keep writing. ^_^
always, abraham |
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