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An Improbable Rendezvous
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 12:50:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She came to me clouded in mystery and mysticism..
an absence about her pouty face
from blue Lake Boone wastes..
her Joan of Arc countenence..
flushed in the fervor of her cosmic faith.
She drempt and spoke dreamily of children
hers and mine.. and of animal simplicities
though not of golden fireflies dancing above brimming buttercups
or buttermilk afternoons and streams that sang in the ebb and flow
...nor of God, perched prettily on some tree
in a flowing robe of amethyst.
Not of this world.
She teaches cosmic acceptance
of all things kind and tragic-
so marvellously vauge and indefinite
her fragile thoughts forever sinking further..
swimming in the dark-
desiring not.. possessing all
well versed in Longfellow, Whitman and Poe
her veiled, albeit captive soul, blooming in her eyes.
I heeded her with saddness
and needed her just as well:
a nunnery odor about her
that bred despair within me-
devoted to her own love now long dead.
another citadel unstormed..
another paradise lost..
and I:
savage and intent
marooned with my lonely passion
barred from the cover of a final haven
by an absence of pouty face
and Lake Boone wastes.
What will become of her?
my frail female evangelist
with lustrous eyes and John-Brown spirit...
only God knows...
and He isn't perched on any tree.
M.O.H.
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Re: An Improbable Rendezvous
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:26:00 AM AEST
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I'm in awe Billy.
I'm so speechless. This just absolutely blew me away. A phenomenal masterpiece brilliantly penned by a very talented and remarkable poet.Your outstanding penned masterpieces belong in books for everybody to read and treasure. You have graced our hearts time and time again with ur remarkable work Billy. Your have earnt ur place clearly amongst the greatest of poets.
Hats off to u Billy, you're a star.
*with love and warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: An Improbable Rendezvous
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:41:50 AM AEST
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| awsome i am speechnleess too. |
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Re: An Improbable Rendezvous
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by shelby on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:59:24 PM AEST
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ok Im blown away. Nothing leaves me speechless often but this did. Your level of poetic verse is amasing. This is lovely, vivid and flowing Billy.I LOVE IT!!
* dances around clapping*
Michelle |
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Re: An Improbable Rendezvous
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 02:50:10 PM AEST
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They are all correct in their comments. You were gifted by God in Heaven, and "no" his does not sit in a tree, ; ). This is a beautifully amazing piece of work. God gave us each a song and you sing yours so well.
Rita |
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Re: An Improbable Rendezvous
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 02:28:41 PM AEST
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Very nice bill beautiful presentation 'bout time u wrote one of these lol. like your style
great write . . .
Ben
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Re: An Improbable Rendezvous
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 09:03:29 AM AEST
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hey bro,
each time a read a new write by you i am completely in awe...and at the same time inspired (and envious). this was great...i loved every word.
let me say this...just because you don't see him, doesn't mean he isn't perched.
great write bro.
wiz |
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Re: An Improbable Rendezvous
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 08:41:26 PM AEST
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Soft, sweet, enchanting but somehow sad and melancholy as well.
Your writes never fail to amaze me, dear friend. Nor does the grace
that is yours. Remember . . . collective works -- it is a certainty !!
You have such a way with abducting emotions. I am completely
jealous!! I am never dissatisfied with visits to your page and
always I leave in wonderment.
Thanks
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Re: An Improbable Rendezvous
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by travisk on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 06:37:27 AM AEST
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memories of loss reaffirm that there indeed is no omnipotent.
well done, my friend |
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