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Mon Berbert
Contributed by
etincelle
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Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Bebert
Jai besoin de toi Sans toi je suis une fleur vent, Lme qui tombe de nt jamais aim, Je suis le petit nuage qui se sent seule dans lnormit de la toile Du ciel. La petite toile qui est perdue parmi la lune obscure. Je suis comme loiseau qui navait pas envie voler.
Ou reste mon doux bte Tu es perdu dans ce monde, Mes rves sont pleins desprance, Tu es mon Bebert qui est descendu des toiles, Mon petit ange a choisi voler avec ma dernire esprance Quand je te trouverai, Je sais qui je pourrai dormir au calme Laissez moi dormir ct de mon Bebert !!! doux Bebert !!! Jespre te garder prs de moi Toujours, partir de ce jour Bras au bras, ton cher cur au ct de mon cur afflig. Reviens-moi !!! et calmer mon sommeil
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Re: Mon Berbert
(User Rating: 1 ) by aernby on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 06:08:26 AM AEST (User
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as on who studied French for many years -- but never learned much it seems pretty fair.
on the other hand it shows a collosal effort and a real commitment, to write a poem for someone in a language not your own--
nicely done
good write
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Re: Mon Berbert
(User Rating: 1 ) by gina on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 08:11:14 AM AEST (User
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tres touchant...j'espere qu'il soit en bonne santé prochainement ...
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