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Sated
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 06:04:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Honey sat on the table
Strawberries and whipped cream
A bottle of champagne chilling
Chocolate and butterscotch syrup
The Banquet was ready to begin
Candles gently lit the room
Sandalwood incense filled the air
Satin sheets on the bed
Romantic music softly played
The mood was now set
She led him to the bed
Blindfolded his other senses all he had
To take in this night
She gently led his way
The surprise unfolds
As she removed his mask
His eyes took in the room
Then to this lovely lady
Dressed in just lace and perfume
Excitement sets in
She deftly uses each article
She had set out before
To bring him to fulfillment
His dreams have now been
Sated
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-02-11 18:04:42]
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Re: Sated
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by PoeticLicense on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 07:25:43 PM AEST
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| "Satan sheets on the bed"? Where does one buy something like that? Methinks you meant satin. Punctuation would also be helpful. But keep at it. |
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Re: Sated
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 07:48:19 PM AEST
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*****Satin sheets on the bed
Lovely poem Shari, so romantic. Wow. Got my taste buds going, my nostrils opened, and wow, woo hoo, very, very sensual poem you have here, all in the name of love. Cool Satin sheets.. think I will take off the flannel and put on the satin tonight. This is a real valentine poem... lovely.. hugs. 5 stars from me... raquelLeah |
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Re: Sated
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:29:52 PM AEST
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thank you for pointing out my error unfortunately spell check did not find that....I did edit it so now is correct.
NoSaint |
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Re: Sated
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 11:01:35 PM AEST
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| Wow Shari (aka vixen) LOL. Great write Shari, I got goose pimples reading it. Erotica, tastefully done. :) Peace to you, Laura |
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