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Fields
Contributed by
JONTED
on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 11:16:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Long ago when we were young
Our lives barely begun
There were fields beyond
And every day the sun shone
Wed run everywhere
Always inpatient to get there
Innocent the child
As we grew up happy and wild
There was adventure to be had
Driving all the grownups so mad
A dirty face and matted hair
But always a cheeky smile there
Every tree a potential fort
Lessons of life self taught
A pond, a fishing net
Strange insects for a pet
In all we did there was no malice
Shared blanket for crystal palace
No tears in pretend fights
Early morning til called in at night
A sheriffs badge, a cowboy hat,
For a magic carpet a coconut mat,
Against evil we were the best,
Until battle won we would not rest
Why did we have to get older?
Tired limbs and mind less bolder
Bodies getting frail in many ways
But never will I forget those days.
I close my eyes and smile, you too?
At all the things we used to do
Whatever our lives have yet to yield
They cannot take away our fields.
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JONTED
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2006-02-12 11:16:38]
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Re: Fields
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 01:00:34 PM AEST
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thank you so much brought back wonderful memories of my childhood and all the adventures we would go on....
Shari |
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Re: Fields
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 10:46:57 PM AEST
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let them try, baby!
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Re: Fields
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 11:18:50 PM AEST
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| ***clapping***Loved this write through and through. Thank you SO much for sharing. It was a joy to read. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Fields
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 02:29:40 PM AEST
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Ah Jon....thanks for the memories.... only for me it's the sea.... No one can take those memories away from me....
(and you know what?? I'm hoping to make some new memories next week!)
Hugs
LL |
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