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New light of a new day
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 03:34:21 PM in AEST
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Dreams we all have
drifting in and out of sleep
sifting through our minds
our won fears we hide
hoping on the new morn'
the light shines in
through the window open up the door
let it go set it free
before it eats all of you
Phases of life pass on by
Don't give in
don't let up
cry no more for what is lost
but smile for what is given to us today
**JENNI**
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PhantomVampyress
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Re: New light of a new day
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by shortcut on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 03:36:39 PM AEST
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Jenni-
I love this poem it really hit the mood I am intoday and I enjoyed it very much! Keep it up! Hugs- Rose |
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Re: New light of a new day
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 06:56:41 PM AEST
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the last stanza hit me deep- needed to read that today- thank you for sharing!!
Peace and Light |
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Re: New light of a new day
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 10:48:24 PM AEST
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| Jenni, I'm with Sarahrose, that last stanza was the ONE. Great write. Peace, Laura |
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Re: New light of a new day
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 12:46:30 AM AEST
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Life is a trip that is sometimes rocky and sometimes smooth, but I think we should take each day and make the best of it. Each day starts with a clean fresh slate and we can write on it what we wish. Each day is a blessing if we just take the time to look for the best in it. Lovely write.
Smiles,
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Re: New light of a new day
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 02:24:29 AM AEST
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this is an awesome write.
Very wise.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: New light of a new day
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 03:46:11 PM AEST
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Purgatori
This is a wonderful poem full of sunshine and hope.
Each new day is a gift and you show that keenly.
Ps
Don't you hate it when your mind is blank --
and
your pin is full of ink ?
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Re: New light of a new day
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:31:29 PM AEST
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cry no more for what is lost
but smile for what is given to us today
Absolutely beautiful poem.
Hugs,
raquelLeah |
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Re: New light of a new day
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by DieRomantic on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 06:06:25 PM AEST
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| I really like this one.. its my fave ive read so far (though I havent gotten to a lot of them yet) veryyy nice. =] |
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Re: New light of a new day
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:47:56 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem this is, and told with such directness of thought. Your style is in the telling of it itself. I just descovered your other pages so i'll be reading more.
thanks for your comment also
on both poems.
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