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If
Contributed by
waiting_4_you
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Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 09:31:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If words alone could tell you
Just how I feel inside
All I'd have to find is courage
To tell of tears I've cried
If all that I was thinking
Was written on my face
Would you even notice just how much
Thoughts of you through my mind race?
If one look from you could drown my fears
And take away the wasted tears
Would I still cry the night away
Or fear to start another day?
If all it took to make me smile
Was the will to from your your heart
Would I know another happy day
Or spend them all in empty arms?
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2006-02-12 21:31:15]
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Re: If
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 11:40:35 PM AEST
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Very emotional write , I loved this
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Re: If
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by frankcube on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 03:08:03 AM AEST
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A great insight on the world of 'if'. I enjoyed your approach, and liked the meaning behind your write.
Please check out some of my poetry, if you have time. Thank you. |
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