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The valentine
Contributed by
mindset
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Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 04:49:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How many years we all sat back
Wondering on a pasts love regain
Today an only play on violin wine
A message to our love ones
Hey nothing is in vain
Shed a tear in the pooring rain
Watched the clock so little remains
Words of few just to be my valentine
Funny how the words nothing but the same
Yet inside a place so obsurb
Or is it just nothing but unheard
So insecure in the words we cant explain
I just want you to be my valentine
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mindset
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2006-02-13 16:49:44]
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Re: The valentine
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:44:46 AM AEST
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Your heart is a valentine. Your poetry has that heart wrenching twist of wanting to know more..
Words are words..
Feelings I get reading your poetry is not for me to explain what you write.
But what I do feel is a feeling in your work.
Happy Valentines Day
raquelLeah |
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