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The Beauty of the Bird
Contributed by
RaineBurkhart
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Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Wings flutter across the forest, of rain,
the winds blow soft within this pane,
Long and bright and beautifully bold,
the Hyacinth Macaw is a sight to behold,
Their wings expand with mighty power,
their tail is like, a falling tower,
Their beak is both shiny and dull,
as this wonderful bird stands very tall!
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2003-01-28 09:20:00]
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Re: The Beauty of the Bird
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 09:29:00 AM AEST
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| very appealing, great touch to the eye, I can almost imagine the beauty of the bird, thanks for sharing your heart Raine |
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Re: The Beauty of the Bird
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 10:17:39 AM AEST
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| Raine for being 12 you have a very warm heart for the beauty! Very god write on this! Keep it up! Christina |
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Re: The Beauty of the Bird
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 12:40:13 AM AEST
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Whether you are 12 or lying to us this was an excellent poem. Very well written and thought out. Keep on writing you have a definite talent.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: The Beauty of the Bird
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by Fwog on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 08:51:59 AM AEST
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G'day Raine,
This is another wonderful write, I especially like lines 3 and 4.
A very descriptive poem.
Hugz,
Fwog |
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Re: The Beauty of the Bird
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:10:35 PM AEST
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| Raine is 12 years old she lives down the road from me, she does great work! |
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