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no tittle
Contributed by
XblondieX
on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 07:05:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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love to me is like a bullet
that hits my heart
it makes me bleed inside
and out
my heart longs for it
and yet it despises it
my heart longs to be cared about
and would do anything
for a moment in time
in which its desperation
was forgotten
and all was well
Copyright ©
XblondieX
... [
2006-02-13 19:05:37]
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Re: no tittle
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by Ka_ching234 on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 05:50:01 AM AEST
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Even though it this is a short poem, it is a sweeet short poem. I liked it because it easy to relate to.
-Ravyn |
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Re: no tittle
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 04:12:18 PM AEST
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| This is a very nice poem. Well done! |
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Re: no tittle
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:04:11 AM AEST
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don't forget...love can be beautiful as well.
this is a great poem, just leaking and oozing raw emotion...BEAUTIFUL !!!!
- Bethani - |
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