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Critizism
Contributed by
jada
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Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 06:10:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I hate critizism because your expected to be the best.
When your not youre with the bad and theyre considered to be the rest.
you try and try to get to the top.
Until someone who doesnt care just pushes you off
one second at the top you feel invinsiable
you fell youre at the bottom
youre not noticed, your invisable
your soul is missing
its gone
now your like an secret thats out
your bleeding but there is no wound.
looking up at the top wondering who took your place.
util you only see you spirit standing critizising your invisible face.
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jada
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2006-02-14 18:10:17]
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Re: Critizism
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by aegurly on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:30:54 PM AEST
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