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Life In Dissaray
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 02:13:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I guess it's true what they say
Love never comes back the same way
Today is just another day
In the life I live in disarray
Loving those you can't have
And having those you can't love
The words I live by
Empty of the love I need
No one understands
People like me are rare
But the ones who ride the same boat
Just don't breathe the same air
It's lonely being this way
If I could only make you see
Love can be shared in so many ways
Open your mind and your heart
I'll show you things you've never seen
Take my hand
Take my heart with you
Just to consider this
Is all I want from you
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Re: Life In Dissaray
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by Spike on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 06:30:27 AM AEST
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Aint it the way. The opening stanza hooked me in, for what turned out to be a very traditional love poem, as well as another insight into a repeating anomic theme in your poetry.
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