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Hands

Contributed by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 01:17:24 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

You call me honey, you call me dear
Youre saying the things I need to hear
I think of slipping my hand in yours
Finally throwing open this hearts doors

But first I need you to know
That though sometimes it doesnt show
Ive been hurt in the past
And I cant let you put me last

If this is something that you want
And not just something for you to flaunt
Then I need you to commit to me
To the vision of what we could be

When Im with you I always smile
I havent been like this in awhile
But Ive been swayed by sweet words before
And I refuse to go there once more

I talk to you and feel this bliss
I know I could lose myself to this
So if you promise you understand
Dont be afraid to take my hand

(c) Jaime Moran November 29th 2005

Copyright Â© yellow_sundragon ... [ 2006-02-15 13:17:24]
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Re: Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 08:16:44 PM AEST
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When I’m with you I always smile
I haven’t been like this in awhile

its like you can see into my heart, lol. great write. : )

Re: Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:40:00 PM AEST
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I like this poem a lot. There is a paralalle here from a movie. In "The music of the heart" The main charecter gives this same challenge to a person who can not live up to it. Your poem shows a singular purpose of charecter that is refreshing to read and think about.

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