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bleeding freely
Contributed by
johnmark
on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 12:44:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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falling stars and broken hearts
clipped wings and shattered dreams
bloddy tears and healing years
this is screaming for an encore
and i dont know how much more
i can take of this black wedding
my thoughts rust as my mind is shredding
and ill shout your name on the balcony
bringing the rain and all the irony
to wash away the disrupted faces
as we all sing in beautiful graces
all because of your name
and you own a love even the wind could'nt tame
what deadly stare of truth and injustcie
our halo has faded away from us
calous hands and strapless sandles
cursed water and trick candels
at peace will be an everlasting harmony
inside bleeding freely
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2006-02-17 00:44:01]
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Re: bleeding freely
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by poet_of_anger on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 03:20:31 AM AEST
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| For a momentary feeling, this was well described, well done. |
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Re: bleeding freely
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by Drapes on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:43:29 PM AEST
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You really took me there.
"my thoughts rust as my mind is shredding"
I absolutely love that line. It's so powerful!
Great Write! Keep it up and hang in there...
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