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As Beautiful as a Rose
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 01:00:22 AM in AEST
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You are as beautiful as a rose
But your thorns are tipped with poison
Your petals cut through all of me
Like shards of broken glass
Cutting through my wrist through my heart
I am broke torn apart
Through my flesh through my bones
With this pain Im left me alone
You are as beautiful as an angel
But even angels can be tainted
Even angels can fall from grace
Like the morning star
With your wings you smother me
With your halo you burn me
Brand me on my wrist
And the pain I cannot resist
You are as sweet as an addiction
Your love was no benediction
So now my cuts have company
Your burns have never left me
My soul was once set on fire
Now its burnt
My eyes once shone like stars
Well now the stars are dead
You are as beautiful as a rose
But your thorns are tipped with poison
Your petals cut through all of me
Like shards of broken glass
Cutting through my wrist through my heart
I am broke torn apart
Through my flesh through my bones
With this pain Im left me alone
The poison has inflicted me
I cannot think I cannot sleep
And it will kill but I know now
It will kill you too
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Re: As Beautiful as a Rose
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by poet_of_anger on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 03:15:45 AM AEST
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| pretty good, but don't let the rhymes control your thoughts, just write and let the rhymes come on their own. |
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Re: As Beautiful as a Rose
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by JordonsBaby17 on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 11:29:35 AM AEST
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| nice poem! |
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Re: As Beautiful as a Rose
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 03:51:53 PM AEST
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| really great poem, best i've read all day! |
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Re: As Beautiful as a Rose
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 08:25:03 PM AEST
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deep, deep, deep.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: As Beautiful as a Rose
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:58:18 PM AEST
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This is well written and heartbreaking to me, your pain is evident and I really was touched by all of your words but the fourth verse really got me, I hope things get better for you
LG |
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