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Stuck Here
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 01:06:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I think of you and start to cry I look at your picture and wish I could die I read your letters and feel the emotion I play back the memories and see our devotion I play the song you dedicated and sit down I rock back and forth as I sit on the ground I wonder where you are every single minute And think about your love and how I couldnt win it You said that you loved me and broke me You turned your back and it was ugly I grabbed the knife and began cutting myself I couldnt deal with all the ***** that I felt The scars remain, but youre somewhere far I remember us kissing through the window of your car I wrote poems about my love for you And how no other person could ever do I wrote that story for you to see How much of an impression youve left on me But what did I get for caring for you A broken heart I cant repair because of you But for some reason I still stick around Because one day I think youll be found Well see each other again and well go home But until then Ill be here all alone Im stuck here think of you And how it would be if I didnt meet you
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Re: Stuck Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by purple_vixen on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 01:24:57 AM AEST (User
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OMG. that poem is SOOOOOOOO awesome!
i adore your talent. Its so hard to explain, how greatly written that poem is. And how much emotion it holds, WOW! |
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Re: Stuck Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 02:08:14 AM AEST (User
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wow, that was awesome. It seems like the type of thing that'd be hard to explain in any way other than a poem.
great job.
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Re: Stuck Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 08:55:46 AM AEST (User
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great write |
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Re: Stuck Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by rapnificent on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 09:27:17 AM AEST (User
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Melancholy (hope as a writer I spelled that write, I mean right lol)
Sad- and yet beautifl poem. |
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