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blade
Contributed by
purple_vixen
on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 01:12:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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blade pressed against her skin
ready to release the pain within
' i can do this' she says
or this pain will last forever more
padlock and chain on the door
no one to help her
no one to save her
while the rest of her life becomes a blur
people teasing
people lying
In result she'll end up dying
with that memory
she presses down the blade
cutting her skin she feels the pain
is killing herself because her life
is lived in vain
her life is a wreck
her body is a carving
and her stomach for ages has been starving
her hair falling down her face
her family calls her one hell of a disgrace
she tears deeper
no one hears her scream
is it reality? or a dream?
blood is appearing
her skin torn and wade
while her life starts to fade
blood pours from her wound
knowing her life will soon be doomed
no more tears fall from her eyes
cause no one cares if she dies
all people hate her
she doesnt know why
but shes choosing her way out
shes determined to die
with this she pulls down the blade
she lays bleeding on the floor
fighting the pain she once tried to ignore.
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2006-02-18 01:12:26]
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Re: blade
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 02:14:03 AM AEST
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omg that was so.... i don't even know.
Well, amazing for one, the poem is absolutely beautiful, taking aside the topic.
really great job |
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Re: blade
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 08:54:12 AM AEST
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| well written,good job |
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