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Orion
Contributed by
R0b
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Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 08:33:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Cryptic writings of the past lies of the future.
The blood stained walls.
And dusty corridors.
All leading back to the source.
Of all existence.
An ongoing journey of torment and torture.
Pleasure and passion.
Were the road goes next is anyones guess.
Which way we go is unknown.
Whats under our feet?
Cant dig it up.
Can you feel it? Can you?
Maybe not
Past the star saturated belt is where it sits.
Waiting for a day.
It knows what it wants. Do you?
You think you do dont you?
Yet, its seemingly impossible to answer that, so.
Look to the stars for answers.
Look to yourself for the questions.
Go back and start over.
Open the gates to the next.
Open the book and read.
What will you find?
And when you find it, will you know?
Are you ready for the change?
Ready
Copyright ©
R0b
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2006-02-18 20:33:37]
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Re: Orion
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 06:46:52 PM AEST
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~*Rob*~,
I'm surprised I am the first comment you have received on this very well written piece from u. A thought provoking write penned so well. I hope to read some more of ur work. Keep it up ~*Rob*~
*warm hugs*
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Re: Orion
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 11:56:30 AM AEST
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I love this poem. When you let me read it at your house i did kinda get jealous a little bit cuz that was the first poem you have like written in forever and i thought that it was better then mine.. But i realized that poems are just expressions of the heart and mind and emotions.
Anyways i love this poem. I thought it was written well and it had a nice flow to it. It was excellent!!!
Love you
christina |
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