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Gossamer Wings
Contributed by
OzChick
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Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 11:42:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to fly on gossamer wings,
Is it so crazy to dream such things?
I want to soar in the heights above,
I want to learn the secrets of love.
Come take my hand and together well fly,
Up to the heavens beyond the sky.
Close your eyes and take a chance.
This can be better than mere romance.
Dont you know that lifes an adventure?
I believe we can face it together.
Can you hear the future calling?
No need to be afraid of falling.
Venus has given her guarantee,
Aphrodite says its our destiny.
Open your eyes and take the leap.
This love will be ours to keep.
Do you want to see where this life will take us?
Take my hand, theres no more to discuss.
Lets fly on the gossamer wings of love.
Lets live the dream, lets rise above.
Take my hand now, dont hesitate.
Well run to the future, theres no need to wait.
Look into my eyes and youll see its true,
Im head over heels in love with you.
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Copyright ©
OzChick
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Re: Gossamer Wings
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:21:24 AM AEST
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i loved that poem. So..sweet. great descriptions and ideas.
awesome job
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Re: Gossamer Wings
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:21:59 AM AEST
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i loved that poem. So..sweet. great descriptions and ideas.
awesome job
~natalya |
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Re: Gossamer Wings
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:40:48 AM AEST
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| Hey, now this was a nice piece! The romance is just gushing out of this one, I loved the structure and your rhymes, this was so enjoyable. Great work. |
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Re: Gossamer Wings
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 04:39:51 AM AEST
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| Romantic, sweet write. I love the sound of gossamer wings. Thanks for sharing. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Gossamer Wings
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 10:13:00 AM AEST
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| Very sweet poem. It flows so well from verse to verse with sweet emotion..Mike |
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Re: Gossamer Wings
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 03:29:02 AM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
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Re: Gossamer Wings
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by Spike on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 04:38:59 AM AEST
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You won me over with the smooth meter and irrestistable subject matter. Venus and Aphrodite put the seal on it.
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Re: Gossamer Wings
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 12:02:17 AM AEST
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Excellent!!!
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Re: Gossamer Wings
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 12:04:43 AM AEST
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Also meant to say this flowed oh so perfectly.
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