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When all is quiet
Contributed by
OzChick
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Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:27:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As I sit here, I wonder,
Do you think of me?
As I do of you?
When its late and all is quiet?
Have you ever, I wonder,
Imagined a kiss?
Imagined a touch?
When you are alone and all is quiet?
Will we ever, I wonder,
Take a chance,
Break the rules,
Steal a moment together?
When all is quiet?
~ ~ ~
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OzChick
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Re: When all is quiet
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:41:26 AM AEST
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| good write. I know exactly how you feel. I hope the person also feels the same way good luck |
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Re: When all is quiet
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:45:41 AM AEST
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| You caught a moment here, and quite nicely. I liked it. like hitting the pause button on your vcr and just watching and contemplating what's going on. Nice piece, even if it's "not much of a poem" in your words :P Thanks for sharing |
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Re: When all is quiet
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 04:33:23 AM AEST
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| Jenny, Interesting write...curious though...fact or fiction going on here? Has a naughty cat and mouse feel to it. Good write. Peace, Laura |
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Re: When all is quiet
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 08:04:13 AM AEST
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well written and something I think a lot have thought throughout the ages
Shari |
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Re: When all is quiet
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 10:10:44 AM AEST
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| Great write. Makes me think of the times I've sat and wondered these same thoughts...Mike |
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Re: When all is quiet
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 02:10:36 AM AEST
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wow i liked this piece jenny good write its different makes you think..
JENNI |
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Re: When all is quiet
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 04:48:38 AM AEST
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I like the reflectiveness to this piece.
Poetry that questions is a great thing in my eyes.
I really like this.
5 stars.
J |
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Re: When all is quiet
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 08:28:05 PM AEST
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What do I think? Well, you asked. ;-)
Short, simple and so sweet. Simply put, I think it's lovely.
And again....you have such a natural flow thing going on.
*kicks self for not reading your poems sooner*
Take care,
Tim
:-)
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Re: When all is quiet
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 12:08:42 AM AEST
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And here I am again, reading it. Absolutely beautiful and am wondering why you would think that's it's not much of a poem.
This is what my dreams are made of.
Tim |
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