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No Time for Tears
Contributed by
freckle
on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 07:39:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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No Time for Tears
I have no time
to cry
This mask I wear
conceals
A broken heart
a fading spirit
I long to weep
to wail
from my innermost depths
Until.....
I am empty
Until.....
I have a void inside
Instead.....
of these tears
I can not shed
Others cry, scream
lean on me
Yet I,
stand alone
Pelted by fierce emotions
I take a breath
wiping away
the
smallest
tear
I have no time
to cry.
Carol Sossaman
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freckle
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2006-02-20 19:39:40]
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Re: No Time for Tears
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:37:38 PM AEST
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a very touching write
good job |
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Re: No Time for Tears
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:23:48 PM AEST
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Hey Coral ... there are somethings you just gotta take the time for, make the time for. A good cry can be greatly therapudic. Tears are sorta kinda soul cleansing sometimes. Oh ... and if ever ya start feelin alone ... just look fer yer freinds and family here ... you gots lotsa that !!!
Nazzy ~
( big squeezies )
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Re: No Time for Tears
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 04:26:04 AM AEST
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| Enjoyed the write, Carol. Thank you for sharing. Peace, Laura |
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Re: No Time for Tears
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:22:28 PM AEST
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Well now, is it empathy I feel? or just similarity.
I think you have caught a mood here I can relate to...sadly.
Well captured Carol, and well felt! |
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Re: No Time for Tears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 02:28:21 AM AEST
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This is so sad i hope all is well with u in your life yes time is a most viscious entity. you still write very beautiful poetry though a bit sad but your emotions are sincere. best 2u and your family always.
Ben |
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