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Trade for Plastic
Contributed by
DieRomantic
on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 08:00:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I cant help the jealousy
I thought it was just you and me
But shes what really matters I see,
This isnt how its meant to be.
At first everything was just fine
Because back then you were only mine
But now it seems I have to share
I really wish I didnt care
Im left here, completely stranded
Youve traded me in for a girl thats branded
Pretty, wonderful, perfect smile;
Beautiful, lovely, gorgeous hair
I hadnt caught on for quite awhile
But now its obvious I dont compare
So now, im simply all alone
Crying silently on the phone
As I leave you with the dial tone
Now youre nothing but a part of my past
When I thought that we would truly last
Copyright ©
DieRomantic
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2006-02-20 20:00:10]
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Re: Trade for Plastic
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:36:03 PM AEST
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very real, good writing (and i don't mean to sound insensitive because obviously that poem came from the heart)
keep at it
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Re: Trade for Plastic
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 12:36:03 AM AEST
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this is very well expressed.. someone close to me can relate to this feeling also.. very good write
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