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Let Me Love You
Contributed by
RaZiel
on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 02:37:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Let me love you
A shattered dream so cold to embrace,
A memory so clear I remember her face,
A tear so sad it creates a river of pain,
A moment I cry as the sky darkens and starts to rain.
Tears so many on the ground its hard to see,
The part of you still deep down inside me,
Each moment I am alone I cant help wonder why,
Why each time I think of you, you always make me cry.
A love so strong I try to forget,
A time with you I will never regret,
A kiss I taste still to this day
A touch from you that words will never say.
But still I wonder, why did you have to go?
When I was screaming out loud I love you in ways you never know,
I guess I loved you but didnt know who you were,
When I think of you now my emotions are a blur.
Come back I know I was wrong, I promise to be true,
Come back, come back let me love you..
Copyright ©
RaZiel
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 02:47:30 PM AEST
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| Very good write :) Welcome to YPCD :) |
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by eggflipper on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 04:15:27 PM AEST
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nicely done
raw emotions come through |
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by Gigi_15 on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:40:34 PM AEST
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awwww...wow..thats veryyy romantic,..I hope she comes back...becuz u seem to be worth it and have strong feelings...awesome poem..it really touched me:)..she's lucky to be able to have a guy like you..i don;'t know you but..by the way you expressed ur feelings..well that said enough..
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Re: Let Me Love You
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by kiza on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:45:33 PM AEST
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| thats a realy good poem,kinda sad,but still amazin |
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