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Retrospect
Contributed by
DieRomantic
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Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 09:21:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I can still recall your alluring face
The way my heart would quicken pace
The breathtaking artistry of your smile
How you made everything worthwhile
And as I stand here on this lonely street
I know we will never again come to meet
But I still have all of our rapturous memories
You spread on me like a beautiful disease
Everything I was told I assumed untrue
But what you did you cant undo
I couldnt ever imagine us falling apart
I blame you for my broken heart
I still have yet to comprehend
Why on you I would depend
As you always succeedingly pretend
True love, you never did intend
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DieRomantic
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2006-02-21 21:21:04]
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Re: Retrospect
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 09:48:57 PM AEST
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this is beautifully written and I can so relate to this feeling.. its hard to overcome! but awesome writing though
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Re: Retrospect
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 01:34:28 AM AEST
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A true romanticist.
*nods*
Yes, i can very very much correlate to these feelings of absolute awe...(worship -if i be so dare to say). The intricate detail. The emotive themes.
Simply beautiful. |
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