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The sound of a house in pain
Contributed by
little_genna
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Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 03:29:28 PM in AEST
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I hear shouts of 'I don't care',
Tempers start to flair.
I don't know how much more I can take,
How long will it be before sorry is too late.
My temper is the only level one,
I don't know how this begun.
I hear cries and screams,
Tears must be running in streams.
So much anger and pain,
Is anyone going to remain sane.
The cracks are beginning to show,
Everyone is feeling so low.
We all have our demons to live with,
But how can we live,
Together when there is so much hurt,
Whilst treating each other like dirt.
SJ
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Re: The sound of a house in pain
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by gmcse8 on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 12:40:07 PM AEST
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| It isnt your best, but still liked it. I almost feel like im looking in the living room window of your house while i read it. that is im sure because of i know all the actors in the house of pain. sorry couldnt resist the melodramtic, but even you have to know that the title "THE SOUND OF A HOUSE IN PAIN" is pretty good stuff, evokes quite an image, anyway liked it, not as much as some of your others, but would read it again. bob |
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Re: The sound of a house in pain
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by Mangs on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 06:40:44 PM AEST
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| Ive been there..prolly not long enogh...but ive seen a different side to it too....its got more love than you can imagine....just have to see it :-) |
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Re: The sound of a house in pain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th January 2008 @ 03:39:08 AM AEST
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I think the title is perfect for the poem.You express,so well,the misery of living in such a house.
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