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Body, Heart, and Soul
Contributed by
drtylilsecret
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Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 11:25:22 PM in AEST
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Can't take it, I can't stand this,
What's this horrible, excruciating feeling,
So obsorbing, so devouring
That it conquers my entire being?
Why do i feel so hopeless,
So miserable, wretched, sad,
All I want is to give up...
Crawl into my hidden bed
Lie down and fall asleep,
I don't know whether i want to wake up or not
Just shy away from everything,
Leave my blackened soul to rot
Oh god i'm just so tired,
Of the misery, the pain,
Vanish in the world outside,
Drowning in the pouring rain
Sick of all the shame
Exhausted of this wasted life,
Bleeding out of every pore,
Throw away the crimson knife
Keep strong, relinquish, fight, surrender
Don't shed a single glistening tear,
Shatter the mirror staring back at me,
The end is threatening to come near
A spirit, not me, i'm not here,
Simply scarred, no longer whole,
Flooding, burning, scarlet blood,
Inside body, heart and soul
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Re: Body, Heart, and Soul
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by hearts4pain on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 09:53:42 AM AEST
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i love this poem...
as i read it..i get to the very end.
and i dont know if thats what u mean by the poem or not but its like the person wasnt themselves...something else was living in their body...some reched soul....hmmm
nice write! |
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Re: Body, Heart, and Soul
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 10:31:13 AM AEST
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wow...beautiful word choice and flow and everything...i like this line...
Sick of all the shame
"Exhausted of this wasted life,
Bleeding out of every pore,
Throw away the crimson knife"
it just jumped out at me...dunno why but i like it. absolutely amazing write!!!
- Bethani - |
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Re: Body, Heart, and Soul
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 10:31:13 AM AEST
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wow...beautiful word choice and flow and everything...i like this line...
Sick of all the shame
"Exhausted of this wasted life,
Bleeding out of every pore,
Throw away the crimson knife"
it just jumped out at me...dunno why but i like it. absolutely amazing write!!!
- Bethani - |
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Re: Body, Heart, and Soul
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 03:35:27 PM AEST
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Oh god i'm just so tired,
Of the misery, the pain,
Vanish in the world outside,
Drowning in the pouring rain
Dear Lord, I am so tired of misery and pain
Won't you please take me out of this pouring rain
Vanish those things from away from my eyes
And in my heart come to live in me, make me strong and wise.. amen.. raquelLeah |
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Re: Body, Heart, and Soul
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by Recyclebin on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 04:34:49 PM AEST
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Wow, and you say my writings beautiful...
Look into that mirror.. Beautiful reflections!
Well done love
Later
~Jay~
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Re: Body, Heart, and Soul
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by hauntedangel on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 02:48:05 AM AEST
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heyz i love the poem i can tell how much pain ur in i ave been in this sort of pain i juss love the poem well written
sera |
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