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a question of lack
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 12:58:01 PM in AEST
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my passion ephemeral as months and years go by
stuck in purgatory for crimes i dont understand why
with dreams of apotheosis of a power to hard to hold
surrounded by futures a crisscross of roads
this story of mine a tattered page of neglect and pain
trying to find the way to aspire with out being vain
circumstances have lead me to the man i am now
forgetting the child that years ago fell
lately my words are monotonous and lack view
my anger is strong but nothing seems new
i still hold my stand on belifs and strong rules
even thou we are guided by a true ship of fools
lack of function and desire of expanding new thoughts
pig headed in my stance many battles i have fought
this cosmic horizion a bleak shard of insight
trying to find the reason i feel somethings not right
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Re: a question of lack
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 02:50:03 PM AEST
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| Go with your heart.. where He can comfort you here on earth. hugs, raquelLeah |
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Re: a question of lack
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 10:10:36 PM AEST
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lack of function and desire of expanding new thoughts
pig headed in my stance many battles i have fought
this cosmic horizion a bleak shard of insight
trying to find the reason i feel somethings not right
Relic....another excellent conveyance of your feelings. Good write, Peace bro, Laura |
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Re: a question of lack
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by detourchick on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 02:19:06 PM AEST
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| yo man that poem was insnaely good ridiculously moving almost like heart wrenching but in an amazing way good job really i mean it good job |
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