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The injected lie
Contributed by
mindset
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Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 05:16:08 PM in AEST
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How many faces smiling promises
Too many times
Just staring at that ground
Did they ever understand
Now its all over
A name slips further down
Man the world is falling
And yet know one
knows how to catch
Angry inside to lost another
Yet i will never forget
For you my other
A brother you never lost
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mindset
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2006-02-24 17:16:08]
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Re: The injected lie
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:19:46 AM AEST
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Re: The injected lie
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:40:17 AM AEST
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what comes to my mind..
Our bodies are hidden under.. out of sight after our soul leaves..
our soul is protected... up above...
and memories of us are wonderful
One day we will all see our loved ones again.
For now, our hearts and minds can feel ... just like we do with the Lord.
This is what I felt reading your beautiful poem.
raquelLeah |
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