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Slipping
Contributed by
Meg84
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Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 01:32:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Its starting to slip from you
Just one more to hurt you
When it goes it will take another piece
Causing the smiles to slowly fade
Wishing you were numb you cry yourself to sleep
Trying to hide all the pain you keep
The ones who do this to you can't see
Its your fault for seeing more than there was to see
You just want someone to care as much as you do
But no one ever does you know they never do
None the less you set yourself up everytime
And you're the one left crying everytime
This is the last time because you're done
From here on out your heart is open to no one
Copyright ©
Meg84
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2006-02-25 01:32:47]
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Re: Slipping
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 03:14:58 AM AEST
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aaww, touching poem, especially since it's exactly how i've been feeling......but it's yours and i love it!
(hope it all works out)
~natalya |
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Re: Slipping
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:15:44 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Slipping
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by crazy on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 08:33:37 PM AEST
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| god dang .this is me completly.make sme want to go and just choke some one for causing me this pain.but is such a good poem for many people to relate to.well done |
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