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Darker blissIt is not for the dead
Contributed by
hurretje
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Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 04:26:40 AM in AEST
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Darker Bliss
It's bliss to see those golden beams
Each time you look at me
We dance, live out our damping dreams
Beneath this gallow tree
It's bliss to feel this firing heat
Each time I kiss your skin
My trembling lips, to hell they lead
You won't regret this sin
Please, my love, don't cry no more
The day is in your eyes
Forget about what was before
It's none but shining lies
This night's alive, another glance
On midnight hour's beast
All dressed in red and sweat we'll dance
This time on blood we'll feast
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It is not for the dead
I yearn for you
These days
Again
It is my choice
No hidden past
This time
Open
It is so real
Don't look at what is yonder
It is not in your heart
I'll reach for you
Tonight
Once more
It is my fate
An endless now
This time
Don't leave
Your only home
Don't crave the burning sun
It is not for the dead
Copyright 2006, Hurretje
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hurretje
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Re: Darker blissIt is not for the dead
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 09:51:02 AM AEST
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| Well done, I like it. |
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Re: Darker blissIt is not for the dead
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by crazy on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 12:28:33 PM AEST
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its so dark and sexual
i loved it thisis the type of poems that got me hooked on poetry.so its nice to read this kind again.wonderful job |
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Re: Darker blissIt is not for the dead
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 05:33:03 PM AEST
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Dear Ben,
I like your poems very much, and let me tell you why........they are written with perfection in mind. It's so evident to me that you take time to think them through, and your understanding, then too can come through.
I detected a saddness in this one.........I hope not, but if it is true........please know I know you will see it through!
Very enjoyable
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Darker blissIt is not for the dead
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by Amazon on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 07:54:30 PM AEST
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| i really liked these poems especially the vampire references |
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