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Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 08:40:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Lost & Found
Id heard the tale so many times I knew the story well There werent no way You could separate The Blues from Slide Cotrelle
To follow in his footsteps Well, I planned to take a trip I left the coast And chased his ghost Straight up the Mississip
Id just about begun to doubt Id ever find out more When to my surprise It caught my eyes I swear it hadnt been there before
Down a dark forgotten alley Stood an old and weathered door That led the way Into a stray Second hand used record store
A sign out front said OPEN No talk of hours or of days The door opened wide I stepped inside What seemed an endless maze
I think every record ever made Waited here for the right price The clerk stood by With hungry eyes Hoping I would be enticed
It could have been just minutes Maybe days or even years I dont recall How long I stalled Browsing through the tiers
When finally, I asked the clerk If hed heard of Slide Cotrelle Glancing down He turned around And said, I got a story to tell.
Seems hed been selling records From the day that time began And he could count When hed been asked about Slide, on just one hand
He said there were two albums The first was cut somewhere down south But the one made here He said he feared Left a bad taste in his mouth
He pointed back behind me To a rack Id just gone through I almost cried Because there was Slide Sitting plainly, right in view
I didnt waste a moment I grabbed it right away T'was called Lost and Found The clerk just frowned I stepped to the counter to pay
He said "I cant take your money, That record cant be sold" To his dismay He had to give it away Least thats what hed been told
Then he said if I was finished I wasnt welcome any more As I took my find And left him behind He cried, Get the hell out of my store!
I stepped back out to the alley Turned around to shout my thanks But I doubt my words Would have been heard The wall I faced was blank
There was no sign, there was no door And I began to understand I would have lost a fight For my soul that night But for the record in my hand
( Author's Note: Slide Cotrelle is a character created by myself and The Ghost Moth ) Here's to you Gee Em ... where ever you may be
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2006-02-25 20:40:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by Amazon on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 09:27:43 PM AEST (User
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i luv how you tell a story while some people just worry about the rhymes
i also how you showed that the slightest decision can change your entire life |
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 11:19:42 PM AEST (User
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Naz, This was an awesome write. I loved the story here, and the rhyming. Very cool. Thanks for sharing. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 11:45:51 AM AEST (User
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A triumphant return of the bluesman! I have to say this was well worth the wait. I was wondering why you had not been posting anything lately, then you told me about this. So I have literally been sitting on pins and needles waiting for you to ressurect this astoundingly brilliant creation of yours.
I mean it, I really mean it...THIS WAS REALLY WORTH THE WAIT!
AWESOME!
- SCM |
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 10:49:18 PM AEST (User
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Woah! Welcome back Slide!!!
What a fabulous return! I do hope there will be more and very soon! Yes?
I love the imagery in this, and to echo Jarred's comment, I was also transported right into the poem.
A fabulous return, my friend.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 09:32:40 PM AEST (User
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Excellent
NS |
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 08:00:27 PM AEST (User
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To speak the truth, I am a fan of second hand stores, love to go through old records, books. You wrote this as if it was a dream, as if on your journey it just metabolized. I enjoyed this story poem very, very much, its very rustic so to speak, down to earth write. I loved it a lot.. great title to go with. the picture, the words.. fabulous. Gold stars for you...
raquelLeah |
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by Willofree on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:41:01 PM AEST (User
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Naz
I must say I feel very pleasantly entertained and very impressed...
Fabulous piece sir
Will/Terry |
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 08:06:09 PM AEST (User
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Having not been privy to Slide before this, I can not summon a
'welcome back'. But I can offer an astonishing "wow!" to
what I am sure is about to be a most amazing journey!!
Go get 'em snazzy!! You write with the most incredible aplomb!
It never ceases to amaze me, dear friend.
*eagerly awaits as the story unfolds*
~Breezy |
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:31:35 PM AEST (User
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THAT...that was incredible!!!
A well woven tale that I couldn't stop reading until the end.
You are a true master sir!! |
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 11:55:36 AM AEST (User
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You did a good job on this. The two of you collaborated well. |
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Re: Lost And Found ( the return of Slide Cotrelle )
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 05:38:02 PM AEST (User
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Enchanting! I'm impressed.
Andrew
(off to read the next) |
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