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Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:43:05 AM in AEST
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Carry me away
on a magic carpet ride
Take me to a far off place
plenty of shadows
in which a troubled soul
can hide
Get me deep
deep in the woods
amongst my most fashionable friends
Elm, Oak and Maple
No matter what season
your look is always IN!
Smell of green grass
moss and dew
scents of the forest
eagerly inhaled
I suddenly feel
refreshed, renewed
Wild mushrooms all around
pinecones fallen
Rocks and roots protrude
on my path
I hear the birds oft
in the distance calling
Sweet sound
of water gurgling
from the tiny waterway
reflections of my face
in crystal waters...play
At peace here
lost in this ethereal world
cannot hear man-made sound
only nature calls
unfurl
Penned February 25, 2006
Laura Horner
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:52:15 AM AEST
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Ahhh my sister and dear friend this is beautiful such a dream of a vision lovely yes lead me 2 this place please a splendid feel i got from this gracious writting.
peace 2u sister Laura.
Ben
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by BSteel on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 04:17:02 AM AEST
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i really liked it, except for the carpet ride line,
i found it very expressive well worth the read,
sicnerly,
Bsteel |
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 07:54:52 AM AEST
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to be amongst Gods creations is to be in the greatest cathedral of all...and such wisdom the trees carry...lovely poem a wonderful way to start my morning thank you
Shari |
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:55:53 AM AEST
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| Nice write Laura, to be in nature and take it all in is a feeling I cherish each time i am there. I felt like I was walking your path as I read....Mike |
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 09:21:35 AM AEST
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| great imagery,well done |
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by the_pied_piper on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:00:09 PM AEST
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I like this one it brings mE back to my house in the country and iTs verypeaceful good write!
sabine |
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:36:51 AM AEST
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Very nice imagery, Laura. A very nice write about getting away from the concrete jungle.
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 02:27:20 AM AEST
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| thank you for taking me on this beautiful ride to heaven, wow.. this is sensational writing.. out of this world for sure.. dreamy.. so real.. magically real, and heavenly real. hugs, raqueLeah |
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 12:06:23 AM AEST
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I'm with Jarred . . . tree hugging is so in this year! lol
Seriously, Laura, this was beautifully descriptive. Took me
back to when I was young and running through the woods
with my siblings and friends. It is truly a glorious place to
find yourself, and you have captured it in a stunning array of
picturesque imagery.
I really loved this one.
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 06:57:31 AM AEST
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hippynurse
I love this write living here in Michigan I often walk my dog in the woods and nature tends to fill one with inner peace.
"Be silent and listen"
no words can be a powerful prayer.
Sinned |
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by Redhotchilichic on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 10:25:46 AM AEST
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| This was good. good work! |
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 09:02:47 PM AEST
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This is a really beautiful poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:28:54 PM AEST
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I remember walking in the woods once near my home.
I sat on a low stone wall and watched a tiny bird hopping along the hedgerows.
As I watched I was inspired to write a poem about him where I sat.
About an hour later I needed to have a ****
I couldn't find a leaf big enough to wipe with so I used my poetic classic as toilet paper!
I kid you not!
Seriously though Doris this is a beautiful write it took me to a place I'd rather be right now.
J.
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Re: Lost in the Woods (it's a good thing)
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by SerenePsycho on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 06:39:19 AM AEST
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| That was very nice. I look to nature for serenity and reflection. I have my special places where I escape it all. I could see everything you described as I was reading. I felt calm and peaceful, as if in my hideaways. |
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