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My Rosey Red Chemical Drug
Contributed by
MrPepetone
on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 01:25:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Ring around the rosery A pocket thats full of explosive Gastly gastric acids We put in our stomach to fall backwards faster than Any-one around us A mother thats glued back together with dust And any-one whose found love Can drown it all down with the rosey red chemical drug. A chemical drug, A liquid that chases the liquor we love A bud from a seed that we never would smoke And toke to the fact that we never would joke about Losing our friends and losing our lives Losing our loved ones to pricks in descise Losing our minds and hiding behind The drugs that we know all too well with the time that we Never spent together. The time that I passed in my room with a cigarette lighter A cigarette light, Egnighting the night that I spent by myself all alone. Calling your phone To hear your sweet voice saying I'm not at home
I'm sorry for all the times, I ***** up every-thing, You tell me that I do not need to be sorry I'm sorry but I just cant help but be sorry It's something that no one can ever just not be I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry for us finding we.
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Re: My Rosey Red Chemical Drug
(User Rating: 1 ) by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:39:29 PM AEST (User
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whoa, it started out rather creepy, with the pockets full of explosives part, but then it softened, and i loved how it sort of told a story.
beautiful writing
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Re: My Rosey Red Chemical Drug
(User Rating: 1 ) by evilfairy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:41:13 AM AEST (User
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very cool...loved the first bit...loooovvvveeed the middle bit but not entirely sure about the last bit. it didn't flow with the rest of the poem... :) |
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