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Fear
Contributed by
Jeff9Man
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Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 02:16:49 PM in AEST
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The world has stared into my soul
Not only did I flinch,
but was unable to hold its gaze for even a second
I have been tested, measured
Im afraid, Ive failed, Ive come up lacking
But mostly, Im just afraid
The world has swallowed me whole
Without slowing, without even seeming to notice
If life is what you make it, Im afraid my life is nothing
It was big and scary and I ran away
But mostly, Im just afraid
The worst is Ive even had the opportunity
It was all there, it truly does knock
But what they dont tell you is that the sound is deafening
I know I havent tried,
that way I can tell myself I didnt really fail
Because of course, if I had really tried I would have succeeded
Im afraid that if I ever do get the courage, itll be too late
But certainly, Im too afraid of being afraid to change today
As always I am afraid
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Re: Fear
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by Inevitable on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 02:56:49 PM AEST
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| I don't really understand this but it sounds good. Kinda sounds like it's self struggling though. Good job |
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Re: Fear
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by DieRomantic on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 03:04:16 PM AEST
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| i like this a lot. i like youre writing style.. yeah if it rhymed it would sound a bit better, but the subject and the words you use fit very well together. nice job. |
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Re: Fear
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by Reese on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 05:12:39 PM AEST
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| i found it interesting, even without great transitions it makes everything better. it's vauge too, keeps the reader guessing with little full understanding. |
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Re: Fear
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by Amazon on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 07:40:24 PM AEST
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i think i might accually get this life is most deffinitly a scarey thing but the main this is to know that others are scared to and not to let the fear consume you, it does take courage to face each new day, to wake up each morning ...
but to just take these words and let them out took great courage |
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Re: Fear
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by Jeff9Man on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:25:57 PM AEST
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| I guess it's about the fact that I'm 22 years old and haven't really accomplished anything. I don't even think I'm all that good at anything. I wrote this because I truly realized that it’s entirely possible for me to live my entire life without ever really being anybody. I see this to be a problem of course, but I’m not really sure what to do about it. I might really be so scared of failure that I will not be able to try. I guess that is what it is about. |
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Re: Fear
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 09:45:51 PM AEST
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Good write..forget the rhymes.....your poem has substance and one can truly identify with it. (You have a Pm...)
Jenni.... |
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