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Ghost of a Rose
Contributed by
themonk
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:36:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Ive written a note,
On the back of our picture.
Pressed between the pages
Of this book, that lies on your desk.
Placed between the roses and the memories
That I have left for us.
Please cherish them, tuck them in the pockets
Of your chest,
And please let me know that I have
Done my best.
Remember when our love was young?
Hopes as high as mountains
And kisses as smooth as
Summers wind?
Well now our bridges are burning
And who am I to say,
Which one of us will runaway.
Its midnight now, and I
Begin to pack.
Careful not to wake you,
Fearing confrontation.
Wishing I could shake this puzzle
And restart the situation.
Clutching my heart as I watch you sleep,
My shoes are cold as I beat concrete.
Crippling shells as metal leaks,
The night is frigid and so the frozen leaves.
Letting time swallow me as I corrode,
I am another victim, a ghost of a rose.
Copyright ©
themonk
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2006-02-27 08:36:54]
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Re: Ghost of a Rose
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:17:45 AM AEST
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| Very good write my friend. Keep them coming...mike |
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Re: Ghost of a Rose
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by moses on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 05:48:08 PM AEST
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Hey Hey vinny v...how u doing man? U know I love your writes.
this one i love, deff. liked the second stanza....I can relate to it.
I was just talking about you today to mr. sanderson in english class when i shared some of my poems.
See Ya Man and keep it up,
moses |
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Re: Ghost of a Rose
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by Voyager on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 08:16:01 AM AEST
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| Wow! Very good write....well structured and a great finish!! |
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