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Words to remain
Contributed by
mindset
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Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 04:46:58 PM in AEST
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Empty voices no place to explain
Inside a word more than falling rain
Our souls the writing pad
Of our lifes creative pain
Yet for others shall we express
Nothing but the joy of word
Reaching up to grasp our sky
And yet looking back thinking why
We are the few of expressionate gift
Set down to define the moment
In our sadness we reflect the only
With our happiness we free the sold
Yet our reflection just question sigh
Jackee_line
For the few.....
Copyright ©
mindset
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2006-02-27 16:46:58]
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Re: Words to remain
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by crazy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 04:58:15 PM AEST
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| nice poem ,lots of emotion |
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Re: Words to remain
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by DieRomantic on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 05:08:12 PM AEST
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| Wow, I really like this poem. I like how it flows, I love the vocabulary. Its very artistic.. love it =] |
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Re: Words to remain
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by mindset on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 05:31:10 PM AEST
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done on the spur of the moment for a poet who can express whats inside, which admire.....
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Re: Words to remain
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:02:17 PM AEST
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Dear Mindset:
Thank you.. I found your soul writes.. I found you. You say in words to fit my souls love.. to fill it up more with your words that only it can feel, the mind tries to comprehend, and it says, send it to the heart.. let the soul eat and drink the spirit of its joy.. joy and peace in words that you as a writer can express to my soul.
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Re: Words to remain
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by dougnut on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:04:21 PM AEST
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Thank You Mindset for a great piece of poetry from the heart.
great read.
Dougnut. |
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Re: Words to remain
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 08:41:24 AM AEST
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| I like it |
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